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Guys, Guys, I am having a VERY SHITTY DAY. (This is impressive, as I haven't been awake for more than two hours.)

I'm not really going to go into why. It's my own damn fault for part of it, and the other part is something that I can't do anything about, and I just sort of don't feel like rehashing any of it. I'm going to try and write it out, but, guys, I have class today, and as much as I'd like to skip it, I can't, because I have tests coming up, and I REALLY WANT TO PASS ALL OF MY CLASSES, because if I don't, I know that my parents are never going to let me do anything fun for the rest of my life, nevermind that I'm twenty because they certainly don't remember sometimes.

So this is what I'd like:

Please, just comment with a link to a fic that you read when you have a bad day? Something funny, something sexy, something H/C within a point of its life, just....SOMETHING.

Any fandom.

Any Pairing (or no pairing).

Just...anything. I need things to read.

Thank you...

Re: *Hug*

Date: 2011-03-21 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zenelly.livejournal.com
Augh, I knew it. Where are they?

I'll check it out!! Thanks!

Re: *Hug*

Date: 2011-03-21 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xtorchlightx.livejournal.com
First were the oddly space-linked ellipsis. Sometimes there were spaces on either side of them, and sometimes there weren't any spaces at all.
Chapter One
"Flitter" is not a word.
"Overwarm" is two words.
"Invasively" is not a word.
Lexaeus' name does not require 's after it to denote possessiveness. Only an apostrophe is required.
Chapter Two
"Countertops" is actually two words.
"Disproval" is not a word. (Do you mean "Disapproval?")
"Handprint" is also two words.

That's all I noticed right off, so yeah... Other than those tidbits, you've got a very interesting plot going. I wonder what Zexion's real last name is, since he's not listed as kin. However, since he and his father don't get along he might have just been removed from the list due to an emancipation or something. Either way, I'm really interested in this. You're handling the story very well!

Okay, then. Hope you like it!

Re: *Hug*

Date: 2011-03-22 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zenelly.livejournal.com
Alright, the ellipses thing... I have a bad habit of just pressing the space bar whenever I feel like it. I'll try to go through and make them more uniform.

1. Flitter is a word. See?
2. It might be, but changing it actually ruins what I'm going for there, so I'll leave it.
3. Invasively is totally a word. Or, at least Word Documents seems to agree with me. It's really upsetting that I can't find it in a dictionary, though. But I have proof should you need it.
4. AUGH THAT FUCKING APOSTROPHE. I will fix that.

5. I'll fix that.
6. Actually, I'll have to check. 'Disproval' is a word. It just might not be the one I was thinking of.
7. And I'll fix that too.

Re: *Hug*

Date: 2011-03-22 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xtorchlightx.livejournal.com
Is that why no one ever makes their ellipses uniform? Hmm...

1. I stand corrected. (My spell check (and dictionary) disagrees with you and the internet, but it can officially go **** itself with a (censored.)
2. ... Still not a word. (Hint: Over-warm is a word.)
3. Once again, my dictionary and my spell check disagree with you... Oh well- the internet claims it exists.
6. Let's just say that my spell check and dictionary HATE you and leave it at that.

Re: *Hug*

Date: 2011-03-22 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zenelly.livejournal.com
It's at least why mine aren't.... *sweatdrop*

1. It's cool. My spell check has given up on telling me when I'm wrong, I think.
3. See above. I make up words that I think are right. I also mispronounce the vast majority of them, because they NEVER SOUND LIKE THEY LOOK, WHY ISN'T EVERY LANGUAGE LIKE GERMAN.

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