Alright, all that aside

[zenelly]

Man, it's actually really interesting to read through old drafts of stuff and just WINCE through all of it. My heart was in the right place, but my words were not quite there yet. I'm a lot happier with the stuff I have written now, and it's just. almost really kind of gratifying to know how much I've improved since the last time I attempted this particular story. ^^