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So, I've hit a small block on the TimeTraveler!Sora fic, but that's okay. I'm having Pixie, (

prettypixiechan, and my roommate Tyna take a look at it to tell me what they think I should do next.

INSTEAD OF WORRYING ABOUT IT, HOWEVER! I'm going to post a few snippets of TTB Chapter 1, TTB Chapter 2, and the TimeTraveler!Sora fic.

Enjoy!

( Snippets below cut )

Alright, so there you have it! I'm having fun writing these, so I hope you like them!

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Current Location: Couch!
Current Music: Epiphany - Staind

Now, you have to understand before I begin this that I'm not whining in any way about what I'm doing or why I'm doing it. I'm just putting this up here for comparison.

For The Twilight Between, I have the first chapter written, the second one about half-way done, and I finished outlining all of the chapters. I'm now working on the outlines and first chapter for Devil in Your Hands. This is not what I want to bring to your attention.

What I want to bring to your attention is this:

I have a document on my computer. It is called "TTB and DiYH Chapter Outlines". This is the document where I have a plot synopsis for every goddamned chapter, and bits and pieces of stuff that I have written for those chapters before I start the REAL work on them. Any snippet I have posted here is in that document.

I have ANOTHER document, called "TTB OUTLINE" (yes in all caps). This document is a character development thing. This is what I wrote when I was just first having the idea for it, and the only thing I knew was that Demyx was empathic and that he didn't know what to do about it. It was the plot developing document, where I wrote down every idea I had for the story and finally began to flesh it out.

I also have YET ANOTHER DOCUMENT called "Two Story Ideas". This is where I write any idea I have for a fic. Anything. It has half of Mnemonic in it, none of Silence is Golden, the beginning of Pants 'R' US, and the very first piece of TTB that I wrote. (It has WAY MORE THAN THAT on it, too)

...Now, you might be wondering why I'm talking about this.

I just...wanted to say this.

Between these three documents, two of which exclusively deal with TTB, I have over TWENTY-FIVE THOUSAND WORDS, just talking about fic ideas that aren't fully fleshed out. "Two Story Ideas" is just as long as the final version of Pants 'R' Us, and it deals with over twenty-five separate stories. At most, I have one thousand words for a story in there. Some of them are only sentances, others paragraphs. "TTB OUTLINE" is seven thousand words. Just talking about the bare bones of TTB and DIYH.

I never really put that much stock into how much I really plan these things out.

Huh.

Sorry, I just felt like I should mention that.

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Current Location: COUCH!
Current Music: NONE, because I am a derp and didn't put it on my computer.

I know that TTB is probably the most ... anticipated of my works so far (murrhurrhurr, listen to me talk like I'm all important and stuff), and I just wanted to let everyone know what's going on with that.

( TTB updates! )

So, sort of to tide you over, here's a small excerpt from TBB!

A hollow, dreading sensation echoes within him. He wants to run outside, call Zexion back and keep him near always. (The last time he has been so well for so many days in a row had been years ago, and he wants to know what it is about Zexion that makes him smooth and unhurting.)

Pressing his hands against the cold window, Demyx yearns. His fingers are leaving vapor outlines on the glass, and for a half second, he expects it to melt and let him through. When it doesn’t, he sighs, leaning harder into the window, towards Zexion. It feels like a line is cast from his mind, straining and stretching for Zexion. But the feeling is only mental, and the thread is formless, insubstantial, and Demyx never knows if it ever reaches him.

(But Zexion turns around and looks up at him, and that will have to be enough.)

Hope it's living up to what you're hoping for!

( Aaaand onto Real Life stuff )

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Current Location: bed
Current Music: None

Pants 'R' Us part 2!

Part 1....
( I don't seem obvious, do I? )

This is the Solitaire story. And it ended up having little to nothing to do with Solitaire. I don't understand it either.

NOW WITH A SMALL SEQUEL!!

Side-Line Symphony

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Current Location: COUCH!
Current Music: Jimmy Eat World

Title: Pants 'R' Us
Pairing: Zemyx
Disclaimer: KH = NOT MINE.
Dedications: to

prettypixiechan. Because she is my lovely beta. All other mistakes are my own.
Rating: PG-15
Summary: Demyx, an up-and-coming rock star, has tons of adoring fans. But he doesn’t seem to care about his personal safety, so his best friends Axel and Roxas decide to put a stop to Demyx’s carefree attitude towards his fans. By hiring a…stalker?

( Won't you Dance with me a little bit? )

Part 2...

Current Mood: cold
Current Location: COUCH!
Current Music: Jimmy Eat World

So, thank you all for your ideas on what to write as an ending! I love reading what people would do if it were their story, and it does help. Really, it does, even if I don't end up using your suggestion.

(I might not use certain suggestions because of the way I want to tell the story, but that makes them no less good, really. Killing Demyx off? Great suggestion. Surprise twist ending? Also great suggestion. And I'll look at them closely, even as I write. Plans change a lot when I write, so nothing is really set.)

THE AWESOMEST PART OF THIS?

I sat down with my beta and girl-friend

prettypixiechan and told her the entire plot of the story that I had so far (which is long and involved and was, at that point, still mostly in my head), and she gave me some REALLY GOOD IDEAS for how to end it.

So I did.

And NOW I'M WRITING IT.

Mind you, I want a buffer zone on this fic. Don't expect any chapters up until I have two or three done, because I don't want to make this drag on forever, and my schedule is unforgiving at best.

But TTB and DiYH are on the way!

*furious fistpumping*

Also, it is snowing in South Dakota.

FINALLY.

((And I turn 20 in two days, wheee!))

Current Mood: Scheming
Current Location: Sister's Futon!
Current Music: Hide and Seek - Imogen Heap

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF, how would you end a really long story about an empath and the person that the empath loves that involves several bad days, a few breakdowns, some non-con and dub-con, a couple of very worried friends, kissing, intimacy issues, and a really bad thing that I just now decided to not mention because I think it'll have more impact if I don't say anything?

I DON'T KNOW.

(augh, can you tell that I'm having trouble with TTB?)

HELP.

No, seriously, just type out really nonsensical ideas, ignore the specifics. Just give me something. Anything. I work best when people give me ideas, and then I spin them off into things that aren't even related, because it made me think.

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Current Location: Properties of Materials Class
Current Music: None

Ugh, so, my inactivity levels on here have been rising, which is actually terribly sad, since I check it every day. Multiple times. And it occurred to me that if I, oh, I dunno, POST SOMETHING, I might have something to do again.

So, things that are going on.

1. I AM THIS CLOSE *holds fingers really close together* THIS CLOSE, I TELL YOU, TO BEING DONE WITH P'R'U. AUGH, two scenes left. JUST TWO. (Of course, they have to be argument and explanation scenes, which are always harder for me than "Derp-a-derp, I'mma snark at you now" scenes. I always feel bad for making them fight, because I just want to tell them that it will all be okay. *wibbles*

2. Homework is eating my life. That's one of the reasons I haven't done much this semester yet.

3. I'm turning 20 in ten days. (I AM SO OLD, COMPARED TO EVERYONE ELSE THAT I KNOW)

4. I LOVE TEA. Chamomile is a new favorite. So, random tea recommendations: Lemon Honey Chamomile from anywhere (or just chamomile), Mango Ceylon from the Republic of Tea, and Lapsang Souchung from the Republic of Tea.

5. TTB is still drafting. I really don't want to start this story without a clear idea of where it's going, but I need to check with my sounding boards about where it's going to go.

Current Mood: hyper
Current Location: Tech Comm Class!
Current Music: Talking

So, I know that I've been down for a bit, kinda have dropped out of the face of the earth, but I'm still alive, I promise!

( For the sake of the F-lists (under here be fic progress reports and life details, just as a btw) )

Current Mood: stressed
Current Location: Couch!
Current Music: In this City - Iglu and Hartley

Just going to put this out there:

AUGH, INCEPTION, YOU BREAK MY BRAIN, WHAT DOES IT ALL MEAN HOMGNJKDSNFAJKDHFJADHFKAJSBD, AUGH!!! (also, the world needs more Eames/Arthur, just saying, can anyone direct me to good fics for them?)

Also:

KINGDOM HEARTS, WHY DO YOU CONTINUOUSLY BREAK MY HEART? (Too much to go in to here, but let's just say that my roomies and I just finished KH1, and we're SO FUCKING PARANOID about EVERYTHING that happens, because HOMG, BBS JUST CAME OUT, AND WE DON'T HAVE IT YET, BECAUSE WE ARE PLAYING THESE GAMES IN ORDER, GODDAMNIT, SO DON'T YOU EVEN DARE TO SPOIL ANYTHING FOR ME ABOUT BBS, BECAUSE I WILL SHANK A BITCH.

(We're watching the cutscenes from the in-between-y games (ie. Days and Re:CoM), because I am a lazy lazy lazy, and I REFUSE to play either of them because their respective combat systems are CRAP, I tell you, CRAP)

So news is: ...

I don't know, I DON'T EVEN KNOW.

Current Mood: amused
Current Location: Feeeeziks
Current Music: NONE, because I am a derp and didn't put it on my computer.

prettypixiechan made a KH AMV last night, and it was just uploaded, and everyone should totally go check it out right now. >.>

Roxas's Mad World

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Current Location: BED!!
Current Music: World's Apart (Separate Ways) - Journey